Robert...you're doing a fine job with the forum and for PAMPA, plus building beautiful birds and flying, too! I'm on your side, all the way.
Regarding your pattern, the 3rd (round) outside was a bit bigger than the first two, and the recovery half loop was smaller than the first two. In theory, it's not part of the three loops, but the impression given isn't good. Corners a bit soft, as you already said. I thought the triangles were a little flat, meaning too wide or not tall enough, but position wasn't great for the camera. Landing was, uh...not your best! But you knew that, already. Was that the pavement, or PE? Changing from one plane to another is very difficult.
I'd ask the video dude to shoot my 3rd flight, not #1. You probably know what errors you make getting used to the different model, so show us the best flight you can do! I've come to the conclusion that body/foot position makes a huge difference, so if you can get your camera guy to show what you're doing with your feet, that'd help, IMO.
I must say that the video was as good as I've ever seen, which is not a lot, but those were sold for $. Many of the models just disappeared during the tricks on those videos, while yours showed up quite well. Panning is a bad idea! The perspective is a little goofy here & there, due to not being exactly upwind, and you can bet that a wide angle lens would make it far worse. I think I'd back the camera up 10' and put some marker poles downwind, maybe 3, about 30' apart. I'd put markers for his tripod at 180 from the poles, then just point at the pole you'll do the trick at. He can stop the camera, move the tripod and be back in action for the next trick (no score to write down!).
It sure would help the judges, if contestants would do that more often. I don't mind moving, but I'd like to know that I'm moving to where the pilot would like me to be, rather than going where I feel might possibly be the right place. It's a good distance from the judge to the plane, so the wind could be a lot different. The pilot should be making that call, not the judge. Thanks for showing the videos, and for hosting the forum.

Steve
PS: What's Ted flying? It sounds like a .46LA with a tongue muffler! He did some nice tricks, too.