Couldn't get a satisfactory run. even after running in for about half hour
As a general rule, 1/2 hour is not nearly enough to get consistent runs. Some of the looser engines might be at least safe to run after that amount of running, if you are very careful and follow full heat-cycle procedures, but on average it will take a lot longer than that for a Fox. If I had a tight motor, I might be tempted to do the first hour, hour and a half with heat-cycling until it will hold a reasonable setting, then hook it up to a gallon fuel can with uniflow, and walk away.
A lot of guys now only get Foxes from swap meets, eBay, etc, after they have been through a few owners, on the theory that it takes about 3 guys to build up enough run time for them to be loose enough.
Of course there's a bunch of other things that might be wrong but not breaking them in enough is a really good starting place.
Brett